Forgive me, I'm not good enough

22/1/2009, 01:22

Bem antes de mais nada, isso não é um poema, é uma letra de música.
Fui eu que a escrevi, e tem um bla bla bla em um porém, mas que não valhe a pena ser explicado...
Espero que enjoy-a

Verso 1
Thank god you found someone who brought to you the true happiness
Cuz the sadness that is with me will last for so long...

I can no longer call you my little fool...
Seems like the fool turned out to be me...

Forgive me. Forgive me. Forgive me, Im not good enough

Verso 2
I knew you once
I knew you at all
The thing we call love
Has never ever been sawn

You knew me at all
You knew me for a glimpse
When this thing started to shatter?
Where's the love that it used to live?

The love won't remain the same
It turned out to be mad
The madness is love
But the mad we call death!

Bridge
SADNESS!
HAPPINESS!
SORROW
MADNESS
Everything turn to be like this

Refrão
Everything I were for your poor heart right now no longer lives
Every piece of you keeps me from lying right by yourside
Now that you are gone I can no longer feel alive again

Bridge
SADNESS!
HAPPINESS!
SORROW
MADNESS
Go to the start again

Verso 3
And we both are guilty
To reanimate the dead
We both feel sorry
To be led by this dead fad

Our guilty is love
And you know it'll always will
Don't Ever close your eyes
While you are asleep

My life's gone
You paid the heavy fare
My words will last with you
Until you are fucking dead

Verso 4
You've broken me in pieces
You've gone real mad
But you don't care about a thing
We both gone dead

Im sorry im not good enough
To keep up with you
And this heart isn't strong enough
To lie for you

Forgive Me
Forgive Me
Forgive me
IM NOT GOOD ENOUGH!

Bridge
SADNESS!
HAPPINESS!
SORROW
MADNESS
Lets finish this shit

Refrão
Everything I were for your poor heart right now no longer lives
Every piece of you keeps me from lying right by yourside
Now that you are gone I can no longer feel alive again

Bridge
SADNESS!
HAPPINESS!
SORROW
MADNESS
This is my dagger!

Refrão Final
This is my last breath I hope now you can fully understand
My life wasnt a joke, but I remember you laughing at it
But now this is the end and im sorry im not good enough

22/1/2009, 17:54

*-* muito boa a letra
fiquei curiosa agora de ver ela sendo tocada

22/1/2009, 17:58

Deve ser gritado, porque não tem muita rima...

Como não manjo muito de newmetal, screamo ou essas coisas mais guturais (?), não vou opinar...

E esse tipo de amor, meio extremista assim, sei lá.. não é uma temática meio batida, já? Tipo... Used, Finch, Taking Back Sunday...

(lembrando que, se for estilo Finch, Used e TBS, eu gosto... já que fui fã por muitos anos dessas bandas!)

23/1/2009, 13:35

eu, ao contrario, nao acho meio batida ^^
qq inspiraçao vinda de uma experiencia propria é válida, mesmo esses temas mto usuais

23/1/2009, 14:28

_ Claire _ escreveu:eu, ao contrario, nao acho meio batida ^^
qq inspiraçao vinda de uma experiencia propria é válida, mesmo esses temas mto usuais

Claire, desculpa, mas qual a diferença entre usual e batido?

23/1/2009, 18:37

nao disse que eh diferente,
disse que pra mim mesmo sendo usual/batido, vindo de uma experiencia verdadeira é valido pra me entrerter e pa

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